After receiving feedback for each essay, you need to update your Correction Log concerning at least five errors and upload it turnitin.com. (Though you will complete and upload a correction log for each essay; for your records, keep all of the logs in the same place, so you can refer to it easily.)
Follow this format, please:
1. Most Chinese families stress the value of hard work my parents were no exception.
2. Most Chinese families stress the value of hard work, and my parents were no exception.
3. To edit a run-on sentence, use a comma and a coordinating conjunction (and, but, or). Rules, section 20