Correction Log

After receiving feedback for each essay, you need to update your Correction Log concerning at least five errors and upload it turnitin.com. (Though you will complete and upload a correction log for each essay; for your records, keep all of the logs in the same place, so you can refer to it easily.) 

Follow this format, please:
  1. Copy the original sentence and underline the error
  2. Write an edited version and underline the correction
  3. Write the grammar rule you used to fix the error, as well as your source

Correction Log

Error 1

1. Most Chinese families stress the value of hard work my parents were no exception. 

2. Most Chinese families stress the value of hard work, and my parents were no exception. 

3. To edit a run-on sentence, use a comma and a coordinating conjunction (and, but, or). Rules, section 20

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